The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featureand make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featureand make comparisons where relevant
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The pie chart illustrates the
proportion
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of
inhabitant's
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inhabitants'
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spare
money
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for different
commodities
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and services
in particular
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European countries from 1958 to 2008.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that the highest
proportion
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of spending
money
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on clothing,
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in 1958.
Conversely
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, the lowest number of spare
money
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on Travel/Transport in 2008. In 1958, Clothing reached 32%
proportion
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of people's total spending
for
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on
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commodities
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.
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, Housing, Entertainment, and Housing accounted for 13%, 18%, and 22%, respectively.
Then
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, the amount of citizens in Europe spare
money
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for food and luxury goods only 8% and 7%, respectively. In 2008, the number of housing
commodities
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significantly increased to 32% in 5 decades, which was the highest
proportion
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than
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of
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other
commodities
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.
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, the percentage of
the
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luxury goods and food skyrocketed to 17%.
On the other hand
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, Travel/Transport and Clothing sharply declined to 6% and 12%, respectively and
also
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entertainment fell but the number of entertainment
commodities
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slightly decreased from 18% to 16%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, money, commodities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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