You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing

this

letter with

regards

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to your published advertisement for

helper

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a helper

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in your home. I am a multitasking individual, who can help you in your kitchen, households, and taking care of your children. Let me explain my situation, I am an international student in Canada and

currently

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currently,

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I have been

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my summer vacation,so

that

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apply

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I want to earn extra income to support my academic needs for

upcoming

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the upcoming

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semester.

Apart from

this

, I have been living alone since

last

October

as well as

I am doing all the household work without any mistakes.

Therefore

, I am

suitable

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a suitable

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candidate for your helper.

In addition

, in terms of my

availability

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availability,

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I am free

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from

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Monday to Friday from Morning 8am to 6 pm:

however

, on the weekends I have swimming classes in the Brampton YMCA. Please let me know if you need any

further

information.

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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sincerely Parthkumar

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Structure

Try to structure your paragraphs more clearly, ensuring each one focuses on a separate aspect of your response to make your letter easier to follow.

Vocabulary

Consider using a wider range of vocabulary to express your thoughts. This will help demonstrate your language skills more effectively.

Task Response

Remember to directly address each point mentioned in the task. For instance, expound on the types of help you can offer by providing specific examples.

Content

You have successfully communicated your willingness to help and explained your availability clearly.

Tone

Your letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for writing to someone you are seeking employment from.

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

150 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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