You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I am writing
this
letter with regards
to your published advertisement for Fix the agreement mistake
regard
helper
in your home. I am a multitasking individual, who can help you in your kitchen, households, and taking care of your children.
Let me explain my situation, I am an international student in Canada and Add an article
a helper
currently
I have been Add a comma
currently,
in
my summer vacation,so Change preposition
on
that
I want to earn extra income to support my academic needs for Correct word choice
apply
upcoming
semester. Add an article
the upcoming
Apart from
this
, I have been living alone since last
October as well as
I am doing all the household work without any mistakes.Therefore
, I am suitable
candidate for your helper.
Add an article
a suitable
the suitable
In addition
, in terms of my availability
I am free Add a comma
availability,
on
Monday to Friday from Morning 8am to 6 pm: Change preposition
from
however
, on the weekends I have swimming classes in the Brampton YMCA.
Please let me know if you need any further
information.
Correct the word
Yours
Your
sincerely
ParthkumarCorrect your spelling
Yours
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Structure
Try to structure your paragraphs more clearly, ensuring each one focuses on a separate aspect of your response to make your letter easier to follow.
Vocabulary
Consider using a wider range of vocabulary to express your thoughts. This will help demonstrate your language skills more effectively.
Task Response
Remember to directly address each point mentioned in the task. For instance, expound on the types of help you can offer by providing specific examples.
Content
You have successfully communicated your willingness to help and explained your availability clearly.
Tone
Your letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for writing to someone you are seeking employment from.