Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

It is a common view that modern

technology

has bridged the gap between

people

while

others argue that it has made relationships between

people

become worse.

This

writer holds the belief that the

relationship

of humans become worse

as a result

of today's

technology

. On the

one

hand,

technology

brings many benefits

for

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humans and

the

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society,

one

of them is that

people

can call and talk to their relatives, families and friends around the world anytime, anywhere, whenever they want without any barrier.

This

will help make

people

have a better

relationship

and keep in touch with each other when they are apart. On the

one

hand,

people

nowadays are becoming more and more addicted to

technology

devices like smartphones and social media and refuse to stop

depend

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on them. Nowadays,

instead

of going out with families or hanging out with friends and siblings, we tend to stay at home talking through the screen, and

this

will accidentally push us apart when we do not notice. The screens will become an invisible barrier in

people

's relationships and slowly widen the gaps between humans

due to

the fact that the population need to meet up

face

to

face

when communicating with each other and we

also

use body language and actions to communicate. Talking through the screens will make

people

become shallow

on

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thoughts and emotions and feel isolated for being alone,

this

can make

people

feel lonely or

sometime

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become fear of

communicate

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face

to

face

. in my opinion, I believe that

technology

will make

people

have a worse

relationship

than a better

one

and

people

should only use

technology

devices and social media to contact and stay in touch with each other when they are not staying in the same area or nations.

In addition

,

people

should meet up when they have

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chances

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instead

of calling through phone or apps, being close to together and looking at each other is a good way to narrow the gaps in a

relationship

.

To conclude

,

although

technology

help

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people

to contact

with

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one

another immediately

in

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anytime

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,

this

is a huge

convenient

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for many

people

, but

this

is

also

the major reason that

make

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people

gradually

becoming

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distant.