You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need saying why you need them making arrangements to meet Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’
Dear Sam,
I hope
this
letter finds you radient
in health and best of spirits. I am very excited Correct your spelling
radiant
for
your Change preposition
about
visit
to Toronto in Canada on this
Summer vacations
. Fix the agreement mistake
vacation
Its
the best time to Replace the word
It's
It is
visit
as their
are lots of tourist places you can Replace the word
there
visit
and the weather here is really very good as compare
to Change the form of the verb
compared
home
country.
As you know it has been Correct pronoun usage
my home
really
long for Correct article usage
a really
me
Correct pronoun usage
I
to travel
back to India so I am really missing lots of stuff and my family love. My parents were very happy to know that you will be coming to me and they even decided to send Verb problem
travelled
few
of the Correct article usage
a few
things
for me. My grandmother knitted a
two Correct article usage
apply
wollen
sweaters for me which I really wanted for Correct your spelling
woollen
winters
and some of the Fix the agreement mistake
winter
home made
spices which will not spoil your other Correct your spelling
homemade
things
. In addition
to that , I just ask
my parents to give you some of my graduation books which I need to prepare for my Wrong verb form
asked
licence
exam for Physiotherapy.
I know Correct your spelling
license
its
your first Replace the word
it's
it is
visit
so you might have alot
of Correct your spelling
a lot
things
for yourself but if possible you can bring these things
with you if you don't mind. I will catch you up at the airport and will really feel pleased if you plan to stay for half of your vacation at my place.
Your's Faithfully
Gurpreet kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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coherence cohesion
Make sure all items in the list of requests are clearly mentioned at the beginning for better clarity.
task achievement
Consider minor grammatical corrections and check for typographical errors to enhance readability.
greeting and closing
Your greetings and closing are appropriately formal, creating a polite and respectful tone.
logical structure
The structure of your letter effectively guides the reader through your requests, reasons, and meeting arrangements.
complete response
You effectively completed the task by including all required elements: the things you need, their significance, and planning for the meeting.
suitable writing tone
The tone of your letter nicely balances friendliness with the formality suitable for a written request.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,