Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live Write an email to your friend. In your email 1)Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university 2)Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation 3)Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any address Begin your letter as follows Dear,

Dear Humera, I hope

this

letter finds you radiant in health and best of spirits. Its really very excited to know that you have been recently enrolled

with

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the course

in

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the

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Lovely Professional University .

This

University is really a good platform to develop

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professional career as it provides you with a great opportunity for

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jobs

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placement too. I really had a good time when I was in my student life in

this

institute. There are

alot

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a lot

of facilities which are provided by the college itself related to

accomodation

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accommodation

and meals. During my graduation , I preferred to stay in the hostel that was inside the college itself as I found it safe and affordable. I would recommend you

to

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choose your stay inside the college . There you will find

alot

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a lot

of

option

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such

as

private

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a private

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room

,

shared

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room

. It will be better to go with the

share

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room

as it will

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cost less and you will not feel alone.

In addition

to

this

, you can choose to stay with the person you know well either your town friend or your classmate as it can assist you with your educational material

also

.

However

, students make

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a lot

of

mistake

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while

choosing their

accomodation

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accommodation

. I would like to aware you

to

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choose

the

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room

that

have

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proper ventilation and a balcony . Even you can look for a

room

that has a private washroom and make sure to check

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the heating ventilation air conditioning

functioning

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otherwise

it will be really tough for you to change

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room

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. I think

this

will be enough to help you

out

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to make a good decision

for

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your

accomodation

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accommodation

and best of luck

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your new journey in

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university life. Warm Wishes Gurpreet