The graph below shows the sales of children's books ,adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.

The graph below shows the sales of children's books ,adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.
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The given figure depicts how many children's and adult books both fiction and education . The information is given in numbers from 2002 to 2006 .
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, as can be clearly seen in the line graph, there was a fluctuation in both educational
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and adult fiction .
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the given information , in
children's
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bill , they started with around 32 in 2002 .
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, they slowly increased until 2005 . After that, there was a dramatic rise in 2006 .
On the other hand
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, in adult fiction , they started with 45 in 2002 . There was a
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in two years ( 2003 - 2004 ) . Afterwards , they started to drop in recent years ( 2005 -2006 ) . In reference to the data in the chart , in
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report , they started with 21 in 2002 . Next , they were a gently lept to 31 in 2003 . they started to less to 25 in 2005 . In the
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period , they jumped to 32 in 2006 .
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