The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 - 2014

The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 - 2014
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The line graph illustrates the amount of expenditure by visitors from five different countries to New Zealand between 1996 to 2014.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Australian people spend money the most
while
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they travel to New Zealand.
However
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, China stay the
last
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place throughout the period.
To begin
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, Australia started at just over 1000 in 1996 before soaring to well under 2500 in 2006. There was a dramatic swing from 2006 to 2010 to approximately 2300 and
then
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noticeably dropped to 2000 in 2014. Followed by the USA which began at roughly 800 and minimally rose to 900 in 2004. The significant fluctuation was seen after 2004 and ended at 1200 in the
last
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year.
Additionally
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, Japan and Great Britain had almost the same exact number as in the beginning, at 400. Both of them varied until the year 2006 when the UK overcame Japan and reached 800 and 500 in 2014 respectively. China which was around 100 in 2004
then
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slightly escalated to 500,
besides
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overwhelmingly decreasing to 300 and
increased
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again to 400 in 2014.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual expenditure
  • tourism revenue
  • spending trends
  • economic impact
  • visitor spend
  • tourism sector
  • peak spending
  • fluctuations
  • incline/decline in spending
  • monetary contribution
  • tourist demographics
  • economic conditions
  • tourism campaigns
  • statistical analysis
  • data interpretation
  • fiscal year
  • extrapolate data
  • spending patterns
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