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Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection of countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection of countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart provides a comparison between
marriage
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 age and family size in 9 different
countries
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. Generally, it can be observed that
women
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 in Eastern
countries
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 marry young and have more
children
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 as compared to
women
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 in Western
countries
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.
In other words
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, the age of the first
marriage
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 is inversely related to the size of the family. Among the Western
countries
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 which included: the United States, Australia, Netherlands, United Kingdom, and Denmark, the United States had the youngest age of
marriage
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 (28) and the largest family, with each woman having approximately 2.5
children
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.
In contrast
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,
Women
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 of the other
countries
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 married around the ages of 31 and 32 and had only around 1.75 per female.
On the other hand
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, among the eastern
countries
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, Kenyan
women
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, who married the youngest had the highest number of kids per
marriage
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, averaging around 3
children
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 per woman.
Whereas
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,
women
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 from India, China, and Brazil, who had their first
marriage
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 around the ages of 24 to 27, only gave birth to 2.5 to 1.5
children
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 per
marriage
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words marriage, countries, women, children with synonyms.
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