The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
milk
was
producted
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produced
per year in various
country
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countries
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such
as the Netherlands,
Australia
, Tanzania and
Guatemala
in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen from the table that the Netherlands and
Australia
are the higher popular
of
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apply
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milk
than Tanzania and
Guatemala
.
According to
the information, the
production
of
milk
in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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starting
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started
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at 11,262,000
litres
in 1990
and
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apply
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dropped to 11,155,000
litres
in 2000 and increased to 11,466,000
litres
in 2010.
Aditionally
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Additionally
, the
production
of
milk
in
Australia
was increasing every period from 11,246,000 , 11,105,000 and 9,165,000
litres
from 1990 to 2010, respectively.
However
, the
production
of
milk
in Tanzania and
Guatemala
is a few
milk
when
compare
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compared
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with other countries.
Milk
was
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apply
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produced in these countries
are
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has
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increasing
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increased
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from 87,000 , 142,000 and 155,000
litres
. As same as the
production
of
milk
in
Guatemala
from 26,000 , 55,000 and 84,000
litres
from 1990 to 2010, respectively.
To conclude
, the
production
of
milk
in every country
have
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has
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trend increasing, except the
milk
in
Australia
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, australia, guatemala, production, litres with synonyms.
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