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The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009.

The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009.
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amount
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 of vehicles which were constructed in three countries from 2003 to 2009.
Overall
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, there are three lands
such
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 as Argentina,
Australia
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 and
Thailand
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.
It is clear that
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, during these years
Thailand
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 made numerous cars,
while
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Australia
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 invented a small number of transports. The area which had only increased was Argentina, meanwhile,
Australia
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 had decreased over these years.
Firstly
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, in 2003, the first country made 235,088
machine
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 which is the lowest result for the period of time,
whereas
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 it had a noticeable increase from 2006 to 2009. In 2006,
Australia
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 constructed 341,268 advancements but it is less than the previous year (452,163).
Thailand
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, in 2003, made 735,825
automobile
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automobiles
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 but by the time
this
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 number expanded to 1,162,356 features.
Secondly
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, in 2009, 245,264
van
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vans
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 were made by
Australia
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 which is less than in Argentina and
Thailand
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. As they had 466,089 and 999,963 cars. It is obvious that, in that year the best result was shown by
Thailand
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, thailand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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