The maps below show the vilage of Stakeford in 1930 and 2010.

The maps below show the vilage of Stakeford in 1930 and 2010.
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The maps illustrate changes which were made in 80 years between 1930 and 2010 in Stokeford.
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, the comparison of
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maps shows a huge transformation from a rural to a mainly urban
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. In 1930 it was a farmland
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with several houses,
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primary school and a few shops, but during the next 80 years, the village saw a lot of significant changes. The most noticeable change is that all farmlands to the west of the main road, along the river, were pulled down and replaced by the residential
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, shops to the north of the post office were demolished to make way for new houses.
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, gardens and the large house in the east
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replaced by the retirement home which was made around the house. The primary school to the northwest of the retirement home
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extended two times. The farmland in the northeast was removed and replaced by the residential
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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