The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to and from school in 1990 and 2010 using various modes of transport. Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhere relevant. Travel to and from school by children aged 5-12

The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel

to and from school in 1990 and 2010 using various modes of transport. Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhere relevant.

Travel to and from school by children aged 5-12
The graph indicates the group of people under 18 using several modes of transport to and from school in 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, most of the nation in 1990 chose a method of transportation by walking rather than vehicle.
However
, in 2010 automobiles were a very popular choice for the public.
To begin
with, the figure in 1990 for walking is famous for the population selection which is around 13 much
also
cycling, walking and bus and buses are similar number approximately 6-7.5 bank people
while
five trillion society chose car passengers and
that is
the smallest number of 1990.
In addition
, looking at the next 20 years noticeable that car passengers will increase to 11 total
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using it, at the same time bus and walking bus there is not a much decrease some 3-5 ,trillion
nevertheless
, walking and cycling are greatly reduced compared to 1990 about 2-6 lot.
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