the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The chart above illustrates the highest producers and consumers of power by enlisted in rank order by country for the year 2014.
Overall
, the diagram represents a bar diagram categorized into two types, namely, by production and consumption.
Further
shaded into two colours of black and white with electric units presented on a kwh scale.
Firstly
, the most noticeable features in the illustration are two countries that are the most prominent users of power, in first and second places from the top respectively,
while
another data point that can be considered is, that generally, we can see electricity consumption in 9 out of 10 countries is always high compared to one country, which is Germany.
Therefore
, it can be concluded that the power generation of most developed nations or states always tends to be more than their total amount of usage or consumption, though with some particular exceptions in the case of a select few countries that probably have some factors.
Submitted by toqeer44 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • gigawatt hours (GWh)
  • renewable energy sources
  • non-renewable energy sources
  • industrialization
  • economic activities
  • carbon footprint
  • sustainability
  • energy efficiency
  • power generation
  • grid capacity
  • energy policies
  • consumption patterns
  • energy demand
  • production-consumption disparity
  • environmental impact
  • greenhouse gas emissions
What to do next:
Look at other essays: