The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries. The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table below illustrates information on trips made by different modes of transport in Canada, Belgium, Germany and the Netherlands
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the bar chart Correct your spelling
while
also
provides data related to the results of a survey into car use.
Overall
, it is clear that
folk prefer cars over other environmentally friendly means of transportation. The Netherlands is the only country where the percentage is distributed across all five parts in an acceptable manner and as for the bar chart, it's obvious that individuals choose cars because have no other alternatives.
Looking at the details, in the Netherlands 47% use cars, 26% use bicycles and, interestingly, 18% walk, whereas
in Canada, Germany and Belgium car ownership is between 68% and 90%, interest
in public transport is less than 20% and only 2% of men cycle.
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and interest
According to
the chart, the percentage of no alternative was 38% followed by eight low proportions related to the need for work after which the ratio of convenience was more than 20% and the percentage of the remaining two points was reduced by half to almost one-tenth.Submitted by yulyawashington on
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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