The graph below shows the cinema attendance in Australia and the average cinema visits by different age groups from 1996 to 2000. Information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the cinema attendance in Australia and the average cinema visits by different age groups from 1996 to 2000. Information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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attendance and frequency of visitors and the line graph presents the number of visits by four different age groups in Australian cinema between 1996 and 2000.
Overall
,
it is clear that
more than half of the population in Australia is keen to go to the cinema.
However
, in the
last
three years, the same person did not come as frequently as they did in the two previous years.
Moreover
, the trajectory of visitors is up and down throughout the period.
To begin
with, attendance in 1996 occupied 62% of the total population with 10.3 visit times. It increased in the next year to 72% and 11.1 respectively before the percentage stayed constant
while
the frequency dropped to 8.3.
Furthermore
, in 1999, both of them slightly fell to 70% and 8.2
then
minimally shot up and ended the period at 72% and 8.3.
Additionally
, the trend of four different age groups visiting cinema was a wave curve which led by 14-24, 25-35, 35-49 and 50+. Starting in 1996 at the lowest point which was around 15,14,12 and 10 and A fluctuation was seen in 2000 to nearly 18,17,15 and 13.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cinema attendance
  • Average visits
  • Fluctuation
  • Demographics
  • Trends
  • Consistency
  • Impact
  • Technological advancements
  • Economic conditions
  • Speculation
  • Growth
  • Decline
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