The diagram shows how leather products are made.

The diagram illustrates the way in which animal

skins

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are made

for

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produce lather items.

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there are eleven stages in the process, beginning with

the

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drying animal

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and culminating in producing shoes, bags and balls.

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, dried animal hides are delivered to the factory by the trucks where it is plunged and washed in a huge container using water and lime.

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this

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,

skins

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are soaked in lime to remove all hair, dirt and fat. After that, hides are gone through

flattering

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process which is cleaned from the fleshing tissues.

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next phase,

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hides are soaked into vegetable matter to protect

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them from

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putrefy prior to polishing which

also

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make

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for

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long term

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use.

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this

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, animal

skins

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are transported to the production company by

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vehicles. In the subsequent stage, at that factory animal

skins

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are used to produce leather clothes, shoes, bags and balls.