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The table below shows data for the largest lakes by area and their depths. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows data for the largest lakes by area and their depths. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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In the table illustration, the number of rivers in the
united
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United
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 Kingdom is typically determined by alkalinity and depth.
Overall
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, the depth class of low channels has a total of around 444 areas.
while
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 the high-depth channels have a total of around 340.
According to
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 the data, in
low
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the lower
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 class,it is clear
to see
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apply
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that the total is around 444 by shallow, moderate, and deep.
while
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 depth classes have high channels with around 340 by shallow, moderate, and deep.
On the other hand
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, rivers are medium-class in
the
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apply
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total, with around 182 being shallow, moderate, and deep.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 3 times.
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