The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980.
The diagram compares how Liverton docks
change
in 1980 and in the present. Some minor and major distributions will be elaborated on in Wrong verb form
changed
this
essay.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the building
are Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
lining
horizontally on both Wrong verb form
lined
side
of the river Change to a plural noun
sides
inwhich
Correct your spelling
in which
it
lie on the Correct pronoun usage
apply
central
of the Replace the word
centre
map
.
To begin
with, in 1980 portrayed a busy docks which
full of several gigantic ships for loading the products. There are three Correct pronoun usage
apply
warehouse
in total. Between two Change to a plural noun
warehouses
warehouse
in the north of the Fix the agreement mistake
warehouses
map
was a crane which use
to transfer the merchandise to and from the ship to Wrong verb form
used
warehouse
. At the bottom of the Correct article usage
the warehouse
map
, another warehouse
is situated alone
with the crane on the left.
In regards Correct your spelling
along
with
the changes, the Liverton docks turned into Change preposition
to
an
tourist attraction where all the cranes were removed and a ship museum Change the article
a
are
Change the verb form
is
dock
in the west of the Wrong verb form
docked
map
. On the top of the map
, the crane was placed with the new building for Correct article usage
the sailling
sailling
club. Correct your spelling
sailing
While
the warehouse
on the left turned into an Education centre, the other now removed and become
Wrong verb form
became
kid's
playing area. On the other side of the Correct article usage
a kid's
map
, the warehouse
that change
into an apartment is located in the middle of a newly built hotel and parking lot. Change the verb form
changes
Moreover
, it is interesting to note there are river walk infront
of Correct your spelling
in front
this
accomodation
area and the bridge that Correct your spelling
accommodation
link
the two Change the verb form
links
side
together Fix the agreement mistake
sides
are
on the east.Change the verb form
is
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, warehouse with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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