The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980.

The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980.
The diagram compares how Liverton docks
change
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in 1980 and in the present. Some minor and major distributions will be elaborated on in
this
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Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the
building
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are
lining
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horizontally on both
side
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sides
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of the river
inwhich
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in which
it
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apply
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lie on the
central
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of the
map
.
To begin
with, in 1980 portrayed a busy docks
which
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full of several gigantic ships for loading the products. There are three
warehouse
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in total. Between two
warehouse
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in the north of the
map
was a crane which
use
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to transfer the merchandise to and from the ship to
warehouse
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the warehouse
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. At the bottom of the
map
, another
warehouse
is situated
alone
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along
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with the crane on the left. In regards
with
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to
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the changes, the Liverton docks turned into
an
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a
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tourist attraction where all the cranes were removed and a ship museum
are
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dock
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in the west of the
map
. On the top of the
map
, the crane was placed with the new building for
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the sailling
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sailling
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sailing
club.
While
the
warehouse
on the left turned into an Education centre, the other now removed and
become
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kid's
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a kid's
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playing area. On the other side of the
map
, the
warehouse
that
change
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into an apartment is located in the middle of a newly built hotel and parking lot.
Moreover
, it is interesting to note there are river walk
infront
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in front
of
this
accomodation
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accommodation
area and the bridge that
link
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the two
side
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together
are
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on the east.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, warehouse with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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