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The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980.

The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980.
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The diagram compares how Liverton docks
change
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 in 1980 and in the present. Some minor and major distributions will be elaborated on in
this
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Overall
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, it can be clearly observed that the
building
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buildings
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 are
lining
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 horizontally on both
side
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sides
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 of the river
inwhich
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in which
it
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apply
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lie on the
central
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 of the
map
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.
To begin
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 with, in 1980 portrayed a busy docks
which
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apply
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full of several gigantic ships for loading the products. There are three
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warehouse
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warehouses
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 in total. Between two
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warehouse
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warehouses
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 in the north of the
map
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 was a crane which
use
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used
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 to transfer the merchandise to and from the ship to
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warehouse
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the warehouse
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. At the bottom of the
map
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, another
warehouse
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 is situated
alone
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along
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 with the crane on the left. In regards
with
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to
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 the changes, the Liverton docks turned into
an
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a
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 tourist attraction where all the cranes were removed and a ship museum
are
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is
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dock
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docked
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 in the west of the
map
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. On the top of the
map
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, the crane was placed with the new building for
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the sailling
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sailling
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sailing
 club.
While
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 the
warehouse
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 on the left turned into an Education centre, the other now removed and
become
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became
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kid's
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a kid's
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 playing area. On the other side of the
map
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, the
warehouse
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 that
change
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changes
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 into an apartment is located in the middle of a newly built hotel and parking lot.
Moreover
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, it is interesting to note there are river walk
infront
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in front
 of
this
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accomodation
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accommodation
 area and the bridge that
link
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links
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 the two
side
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sides
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 together
are
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is
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 on the east.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, warehouse with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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