The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016
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number
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numbers
patients
visiting various clinics of a hospital in
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at
weekend
over 6 years, starting from 2010.
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weekends
Overall
, it can be observed that all figures have an upward trend, expect
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except
Moreover
, the number
of eye
was the highest Change to a plural noun
eyes
while
Diabetic was the lowest point in this
picture.
Looking at the number
of illness
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citizens
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was
started at around 20 in 2010 Unnecessary verb
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then
reached the top of 270 illness
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going
at
the final period Change preposition
in
with
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to
patients
. In addition
, the clinics of eye
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the eye
an eye
rised
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raised
illness
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citizens
in 2012 and reached at
peak in 2016 with 30 sick individuals, Correct your spelling
a
it
was the highest Correct pronoun usage
which
number
in this
graph.
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of citizens
who went to
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were
then
it decreased in 2012 with
nearly 50 but it climbed up to 130 Change preposition
to
patients
in 2016. Furthermore
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who
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to
patients
between 2014 and 2016 then
reached at
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patients
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