Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that

student

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students

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ought to pay

full

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the full

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fee

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fees

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during their

studying

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studies

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due to

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because

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the priority of university education is individual not society. The writer

disagree

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disagrees

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with

this

statement and

this

essay

illustrate

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the reasons why. It can be

understand

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that nowadays, the demand

of

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for

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every

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apply

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college

in

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money

is increasing. Because of

this

lead to the requirement of

school

cost risen.

However

, not every family have

ability

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the ability

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to afford

for

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apply

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that

money

.

For example

, if your family let you study in a private

school

they will think about the cost before

apply

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applying

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but if you study in a public

school

with the results you gained to apply for that

school

and you still have to pay

as

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apply

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the cost of private

school

it will not fair.

Moreover

, some students try to study to get

schorlarships

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scholarships

instead

of paying

fee

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fees

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. If we have to pay

full

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the full

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fee

the

schorlarships

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scholarships

scholarship

will not have value. Another point worth is that the full

fee

helps

university

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the university

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a lots

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lots

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in

upgrade

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or

support for

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the facilities in

school

and it can

get

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make

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the environment better.

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maybe

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may be

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true but the

student

will get

pressure

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pressured

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for

money

and

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apply

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lead

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leading

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to problems that they want to earn

money

to help their family and they will

lost

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balance between manage timetable and studying.

For instance

, a

student

have to do both work to make

money

and maintain good

grade

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grades

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so if they have

experiences

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experience

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they can do it but rarely because most of the time they are focusing on studying not making

money

in university. As a final observation, the alternative of paying

full

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the full

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fee

is considered. It might

helpful

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be helpful

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with the

school

but with

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students

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student

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student,

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it will make a big pressure and the quality of

collage

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college

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will decrease.