The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electrcity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Contained in the diagram is the data pertaining to different steps used in order to produce electricity from a coal type.

Overall

, the whole process includes 8 stages commencing with the mine and culminating with the electricity’s distribution to the wholesalers ready to be consumed. At the beginning of the process, a large quantity of coal is extracted from a long tunnel in the mine. It

then

being crushed, put into carts and transported via truck to the gasifier where the collected coal is heated consistently so as to transform it into the gaseous form. After that, it will be cooled and the unwanted substances will be released in the form of heat.

Following

this

sequence, the cooled gas undergoes a cleaning procedure and is

transfered

Correct your spelling

transferred

to the gas power plant, where the heat once again is dissipated as waste.

Subsequently

, the final product will be distributed to either households or factories for various purposes.

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