The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and the present.

The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and the present.
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The two provided illustrations depict anticipated transformations in a coastal village from 1995 to the present. Broadly speaking, the village has undergone significant changes characterized by the development of recreational facilities and transportation infrastructure.
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, the residential area has expanded, and the restaurant sector has experienced growth,
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the hotel and café have remained unchanged. Starting with the northeast quarter of the map, new housing developments have been extended, leading to the installation of a new road network. Turning to the northwest, farmland has been cleared to make way for the construction of a golf course, accompanied by the demolition of a forest park to accommodate forthcoming tennis courts. Other notable modifications include the construction of a new parking area adjacent to the existing hotel in the southeastern part of the region. In the final quarter of the village, the restaurants have been converted into shops. On the opposite side of these modern shops, there used to be a row of stalls in the fish market; now, they have been repurposed into apartment blocks.
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, the fishing part was slated to
constructed
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in the sea.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • evolution
  • seaside village
  • infrastructure
  • housing estates
  • commercialization
  • amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • demographics
  • sustainability
  • preservation
  • urbanization
  • tourism
  • accessibility
  • conservation
  • gentrification
  • land use
  • residential areas
  • urban planning
  • ecological footprint
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