The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.

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The flowchart provides key information about the trapping of

Sun

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energy for greenhouse gases.

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, it is clear from the graph that human activities play a crucial role in the creation of carbon dioxide.

In addition

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sun

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the sun

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can affect the heating underground and reflect into the space.

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, extra carbon dioxide

reflected

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is reflected

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off

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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According to

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what is shown, human activities

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as factories and transportation have

a critical ways

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to increase the

Co2

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CO2

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into space by burning fossil fuels.

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, cutting

forest

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forests

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can damage the underground atmosphere

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increase the carbon dioxide. In terms of the

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sun

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impact

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greenhouses

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greenhouse

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gases there

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a various stages for

this

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process, Starting with the

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sun

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shine into sacrifice can

creat

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create

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heating.

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this

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step will demonstrate

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apply

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burning the Co2

then

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heating energy radiated into space.

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the reflection of

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sun light

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sunlight

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clouds will increase the heating. Meanwhile, the heat trapped by

greenhouses

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greenhouse

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gases,

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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156 words

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The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.

Human activities have negative effects on the plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this question. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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