The chart shows British emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007 . Summarize the information and make comparison. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provides key information about emigration to select destinations in
United
Kingdom from 2004 to 2007.The units are measured in Correct article usage
the United
thousand
.Fix the agreement mistake
thousands
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Asutralia
. Correct your spelling
Australia
In addition
, 2006 is
the highest rate, Verb problem
had
whereas
the
New Zealand Correct article usage
apply
is
the Verb problem
had
less
ratio in 2006.Correct your spelling
lowest
According to
what is shown, Spain is the second higher between
the 5 countries in 2004 and 2005 the ratio Change preposition
of
reatched
to 35 thousand when 2006 Correct your spelling
reached
were
was 32 and 2007 Unnecessary verb
apply
is
the less one. In 2004 the ratio Unnecessary verb
apply
in
Change preposition
between
USA
and France Correct article usage
the USA
reatched
Correct your spelling
reached
out
to the same level Change preposition
apply
in
23 thousand when Change preposition
at
was
in 2005 Verb problem
apply
USA
were 16 and France Correct article usage
the USA
is
34. 2006 in Wrong verb form
was
USA
is 22 and in France is 25 Correct article usage
the USA
whereas
2007 in both countries were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
in
the same level. Change preposition
at
To sum
up
Australia have Add a comma
up,
the
higher rate compared to Correct article usage
a
others
countries.Correct quantifier usage
other
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