The diagrams below show a community center's changes in the last ten years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The information of changes in community
centre
from last
ten year to now.
Overall
, the graph shows many changes, but parking, kitchen and reception are at the same place in the same area
. Whereas
, other areas are changed.
Looking at statistics, the centre
of this
community centre
had an entrance and reception which remained in the same place. However
, there was a café and toilet on the right side of reception which is replaced by an office now. After that, the hall with 100 seats is still there. 10 years ago, there was a storage room which is added toilet with this
now.
The Garden and Parking were on the left side of a community center 10 years ago but without touching parking, they built Indoor sports in the garden area
. Moreover
, on the right side of centre
, before, it had four offices which were replaced by Café Correct article usage
the centre
Area
. Then
, the Kitchen is in the same place with the same area
as before.Submitted by AP on
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