The diagram below shows a simple system that turn dirty water into clean water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The above diagram displays the working mechanism of a
water
Use synonyms
filter
. The diagram illustrates the parts that make up the vessel.
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Firstly
, there are two vessels - one being the Linking Words
filter
part and the other being the Use synonyms
storage
part. The Use synonyms
filter
is a plastic barrel and has four levels. The first level is covered on top by a plastic lid and it is the area where the unclean Use synonyms
water
is poured into. The Use synonyms
second,
third and fourth levels are made up of sand, charcoal and gravel respectively. Linking Words
Additionally
, there are three spikes located beneath the Linking Words
filter
.
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Secondly
, there is a small tube that connects the Linking Words
water
Use synonyms
filter
to the Use synonyms
storage
drum. The tube helps in the transportation of the clean filtered Use synonyms
water
after it passes through the three levels. Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
, the Linking Words
storage
drum has a tap at the bottom which can be used by the end users to fill their glasses.
Apart from the above-mentioned details, the illustration Use synonyms
also
maps the direction the Linking Words
water
moves with the help of arrows. The Use synonyms
water
flows downward from the Use synonyms
filter
to the Use synonyms
storage
drum after passing through three sections of filtering. Use synonyms
Thus
, Linking Words
this
is the process of purifying Linking Words
water
.Use synonyms
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