Thanks to development of science and technology, the lifestyle have become more and more similar across the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Improvement of science and technology affect lifestyle and almost all countries worldwide become the same. In

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statement, I will describe the advantages and disadvantages of the similarity of the lifestyle. There are so many positive developments rather than negative ones. The convergence of lifestyles worldwide

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scientific and technological advancements can be seen from different dimensions. proponents argue that

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globalization of lifestyle brings numerous benefits, including enhancing global communication, fostering a better understanding among diverse cultures, and contributing to economic growth, They believe that technology, through its influence on media, travel. and commerce, has created a more interconnected and homogeneous global village.

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Include a conclusion that clearly states your own viewpoint on whether you see the development as more positive or negative, as the prompt specifically asks for your opinion.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

105 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

convergence
globalization
interconnected
homogeneous
phenomenon
cultural identity
diversity
global tapestry
dominant global culture
consumerism
environmental implications
resource depletion
sustainable
uniform habits
climate change
standardization
health and safety standards
medical care
food safety
life expectancies
quality of life
mobility
integration
expatriates

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Thanks to development of science and technology, the lifestyle have become more and more similar across the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?

Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

Nowadays the importance of teachers is diminishing due to increased availability of alternative resources to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

You are Dimitar Borisov/Elena Borisova. You stayed at a holiday resort recommended by your travel agent. However, you did not enjoy your stay due to a number of difficulties. Write a formal letter complaining about the service the hotel offers.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to thei main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.