More and more people use private motorbikes or cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With a startling pace of worldwide technology and

economy

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deveoplment

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development

in recent decades, private automobiles find

its

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their

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way to almost every family.

This

prevalent trend

are

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causing problems

such

as overcrowded traffic, vast pollution and

high

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a high

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rate of road accidents. In

this

essay, I will talk about the reasons

of

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this

trend and the solutions to tackle the issues. First of all, preference in using own

vechiles

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vehicles

to travel is simply resulting from the convenience. A private car allows the commuters to start the

engin

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engine

anytime without waiting in a queue for a fixed schedule or any stops on their way. With the smart functions on the

vechiles

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vehicles

, the driver can listen to the radio, enjoy

the

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music,

head

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and head

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to any

destinations

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by

navigation

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on a digital map.

In addition

,

due to

the affordable price of nowadays cars and motorbikes, they become a common household

transportation

. Three decades ago, a sedan

is

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not a usual commodity to an average family.

However

, in the current era, the living standard is growing fast

while

the price of cars is declining

owning

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to the competition of the market. Eventually, owning a family car is an inevitable trend, the negative effects can not be ignored. It is imperative for the government to get out

out

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of

this

dilemma by

encourageing

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encouraging

people to take public

transportation

.

To begin

with, citizens should be educated about their

resoponsiblities

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responsibilities

of

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protecting the environment. As one bus or subway can carry 10 times or 20 times more people than a car, each

individule

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individual

can minimize the carbon dioxide created on the way. Meanwhile, ticket

fare

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fares

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for public

transportation

should be reduced and free public

transportation

should be provided to special groups of people,

such

as the

stduents

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students

,

senior

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and the disabled.

Last

but not least, the

govenment

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government

should allocate the budget

into

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the road

constructions

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so that more bus routes and subway lines can be put into use. If everyone

make

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their effort and hand in hand with the government, a safer, cleaner, less crowded

tranffic

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transport

system will be under our feet.