The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession
The chart and table compare the
salaries
when started and three years later indicated in
pounds
and average working
hours
per
week
of
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for
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various professions
such
as Police, Nurse,
Firefighther
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Firefighter
, and Underground
driver
, in the United Kingdom, respectively.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the
salaries
earned by underground drivers
was
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the highest ,
whereas
that of nurses
receive
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the lowest amount of monthly wages. Meanwhile, the average weekly working hour of the underground
driver
work
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is
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the fewest
hours
.
To begin
with, at 50,000
pounds
the underground
driver
was the highest among the other professions when started working in the field, followed by firefighter, police, and nurse, at 40,000
pounds
, 21,000
pounds
, and 18,000
pounds
, respectively.
However
, it is interesting to note that in terms of
rise
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the rise
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of
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in
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salaries
after three years, every profession earned
extra
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an extra
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amount of not more than 2,000
pounds
. In regards
with
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to
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average working
hours
per
week
,
although
the underground
driver
recieve
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receives
highest
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the highest
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salaries
and yet
working
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the fewest
hours
at 36
hours
per
week
only.
While the
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The
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firefighter
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firefighters
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whose income almost
outwin
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earned
the underground
driver
work
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worked
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the hardest at 55
hours
per
week
, followed by police and
nurse
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nurses
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at 40 and 38
hours
per
week
, respectively.
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