The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession
The chart and table compare the
salaries
when started and three years later indicated in pounds
and average working hours
per week
of
various professions Change preposition
for
such
as Police, Nurse, Firefighther
, and Underground Correct your spelling
Firefighter
driver
, in the United Kingdom, respectively.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the salaries
earned by underground drivers was
the highest , Change the verb form
were
whereas
that of nurses receive
the lowest amount of monthly wages. Meanwhile, the average weekly working hour of the underground Wrong verb form
received
driver
work
the fewest Verb problem
is
hours
.
To begin
with, at 50,000 pounds
the underground driver
was the highest among the other professions when started working in the field, followed by firefighter, police, and nurse, at 40,000 pounds
, 21,000 pounds
, and 18,000 pounds
, respectively. However
, it is interesting to note that in terms of rise
Add an article
the rise
of
Change preposition
in
salaries
after three years, every profession earned extra
amount of not more than 2,000 Correct article usage
an extra
pounds
.
In regards with
average working Change preposition
to
hours
per week
, although
the underground driver
recieve
Correct your spelling
receives
highest
Correct article usage
the highest
salaries
and yet working
the fewest Wrong verb form
works
hours
at 36 hours
per week
only. While the
Correct word choice
The
firefighter
whose income almost Fix the agreement mistake
firefighters
outwin
the underground Correct your spelling
earned
driver
work
the hardest at 55 Wrong verb form
worked
hours
per week
, followed by police and nurse
at 40 and 38 Fix the agreement mistake
nurses
hours
per week
, respectively.Submitted by kamonluck1999 on
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