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Nowadays student can access information online, so library services are no longer. Do you agree or disagree?

#student #access #information #library #services
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Various schools and university
students
 are able to
study
 from various online platforms, and
this
 is all possible with advances in technology specifically with the
internet
, which is an ocean of information.
However
, we cannot deny that the
internet
 has become an indispensable part of life and it is helping
students
 to gain knowledge in almost every field, but still, I disagree with the statement because
library
services
 play a great role in accessing authentic materials like
books
. First of all, there are various benefits of the
library
. In the
library
,
students
 are able to borrow different
books
 related to their course of
study
, and these
books
 always have authenticity because these
books
 are written by renowned authors who have given practical explanations with myriad examples to assist
students
.
Also
,
students
 can rely on and trust these
books
 fully without having any doubt about them because all the writers who wrote these
books
 had researched a lot on various topics to draw a certain conclusion.
On the other hand
, it is inevitable that
internet
 sources are easy to access, but we can always question their authenticity because various sources do not have any authors,
for example
, blogs.
In addition
,
library
services
 are quite affordable.
For example
, we have to pay a few dollars to get their membership, and we can enjoy other
services
 like booking a conference room or a meeting room or a room to give an important exam as complimentary.
Furthermore
, we can borrow
books
 from the
library
 suggested by the university or school tutors at a very nominal price and can always return them. But, if we want to access an original copy of a certain book from the
internet
,
then
 it is very expensive, and we cannot even return the book if we do not need it anymore.
Also
, subscribing to various authentic online
study
 materials can sometimes be hard to afford. In conclusion,
although
 with technological innovation, it is convenient for pupils to access
study
 materials like
books
, articles, and other sources online, the authenticity of
books
 and other
services
 of the
library
 cannot be ignored.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Access to information
  • Quiet study space
  • Physical books
  • Community events
  • Librarians
  • Digital divide
  • Internet connection
  • Credibility
  • Curated databases
  • Paywalls
  • Convenience
  • Remote access
  • Digital library
  • Carbon footprint
  • Study habits
  • Traditional library services
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