The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

An argument has arisen about the main goal of science, some people believe that it should improve

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people's

lives

,

while

others reject that. In

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report, I will go through the merits and demerits of

this

belief, and

then

allow me to share my point of view.

To begin

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many people believe that

scientist

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scientists

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should concentrate on developing their

lives

because of a variety of reasons.

Firstly

, it consumes the government's money. For

further

explanation, studies capture that a huge percentage of financial resources was spent to support the scientists and to provide pieces of equipment, especially

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their tools are usually expensive.

Secondly

, it is useless to study in a field that

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not help humankind. An article captured that most

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studies that do not focus on mankind are useless because the main purpose of searching and studying is improving the ways of living.

Besides

that, mankind is the most important creature

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the planet, so they should just think about fixing their issues and providing more satisfying

lives

for them.

Although

the points mentioned above are influencing, there are reverse points that hold equal influence. The first point is that researchers concentrate on more important aspects.

For example

, global warming, climate change, creatures decline, and many other fields that affect the whole planet.

Moreover

, a lot of experts

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that they try to improve

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individuals

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lives

, but they must concentrate on the most effective problems because these problems are affecting both

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humankind and other species.

Besides

that, it is not the

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responsibility, indeed, the

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is in charge of that. To explain that

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governments themselves acknowledge that it is their spot to take care of citizens and

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to provide

a comfortable, relaxing, satisfying, and restful

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comfortable, relaxing, satisfying, and restful life

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lives

for them. In conclusion, even though improving the population status is important, beneficial, useful, and helpful, solving the most effective issues is more strategic, necessary, and needful.

As a result

, I completely disagree with the statement mentioned above.