The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph below illustrates the number of households
comparing
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to the salaries which took place in
US
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during three years that started in 2007 and finished in 2015. At first glance at the bar graph, the third group remained stable during the whole period. Another noticeable feature occurred in 2015, at that time, the gap between the fourth and fifth categories reached its peak.
To begin
with, during 2007, on the one hand, the fourth
class
hit the lowest point;
on the other hand
, the fifth
class
whose salary equals a hundred thousand or above hit the highest point. The category that takes under 500 thousand surpassed the first and third groups. After that in 2011, The second
class
equalled the highest number, and the fourth category remained in the lowest level.
Moreover
, in 2015 the 4th group showed an upward and equalled approximately 33 Million,
while
the second group slightly decreased and
it
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was less than 30 Million.
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a final note, the second bar overcame the first one during the whole duration;
besides
that, the third
class
surpassed the fourth one during the three years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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