The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the ten
countries
with the highest fuel costs and provides a breakdown of average monthly earnings and expenditure on
petrol
. Of the ten
countries
, those in northern Europe have the highest
income
with Norwegians and the Swedish earning the most.
In contrast
, there are only two
non European
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non-European
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countries
on the table, Turkey and
Eritrea
, and they have the lowest
income
with people in
Eritrea
earning on average approximately a tenth that of those in Norway, the highest at $4329.07. It is
also
interesting to note that there is very little variation in the amount of money spent on
petrol
and that
this
does not seem to correlate to location or
income
.
For example
,
expendature
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expenditure
expenditures
in Norway and Turkey is very similar ($319.85 and $315.96 respectively) and in Sweden and
Eritrea
it is identical at $275. In summary, there is a huge disparity in
income
in the listed
countries
but very little difference in how much of
this
is spent on
petrol
.
This
means that there is a huge discrepancy in the percentage of
income
spent on
petrol
with Norway spending 7.4% of their
income
on fuel compared with over sixty percent in
Eritrea
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geographical distribution
  • per capita income
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • correlate
  • anomalies
  • impact
  • cost of living
  • transportation
  • external factors
  • oil production rates
  • import dependencies
  • subsidies
  • taxation policies
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