The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the ten
countries
with the highest fuel costs and provides a breakdown of average monthly earnings and expenditure on petrol
.
Of the ten countries
, those in northern Europe have the highest income
with Norwegians and the Swedish earning the most. In contrast
, there are only two non European
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non-European
countries
on the table, Turkey and Eritrea
, and they have the lowest income
with people in Eritrea
earning on average approximately a tenth that of those in Norway, the highest at $4329.07.
It is also
interesting to note that there is very little variation in the amount of money spent on petrol
and that this
does not seem to correlate to location or income
. For example
, expendature
in Norway and Turkey is very similar ($319.85 and $315.96 respectively) and in Sweden and Correct your spelling
expenditure
expenditures
Eritrea
it is identical at $275.
In summary, there is a huge disparity in income
in the listed countries
but very little difference in how much of this
is spent on petrol
. This
means that there is a huge discrepancy in the percentage of income
spent on petrol
with Norway spending 7.4% of their income
on fuel compared with over sixty percent in Eritrea
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