The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The cartographic representations presented below provide a vivid depiction of the significant transformations that have transpired in Nelson
city
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since the year 2000. It is evident that the erection of numerous commercial edifices has led to the removal of several verdant areas. It is worth noting that the university has remained untouched,
while
the train station has undergone a complete overhaul. The northern side of the street has undergone a complete metamorphosis, being entirely transformed into a pedestrian-only zone. On the southeast side, a new shopping complex
has
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emerged after clearing trees beside the university;
however
, the university remained unscathed. The train station has
also
undergone reconstruction and has been positioned in the
center
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.
Additionally
, the old market beside the tramline, which underwent an upgrade to include a bike rental scheme, has been demolished to make way for a new shop. The new covered market has been erected opposite the new shop. On the opposite side of the street, which was previously home to bars and restaurants that overlooked the river, now stands deserted.
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