The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph illustrates the carbon dioxide
emissions
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per individual in 4 different countries (the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal) during 40 years (from 1967 to 2007).
Overall
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, It can be seen that the CO2
emissions
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for both the UK and Sweden (with certain fluctuations) declined,
while
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the opposite happened to Italy and Portugal. During the graph, the UK showed the highest indicators. Italy had around 4
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of
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in 1967
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Portugal had
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close to a tonne. Both of them kept increasing, and experienced a faster burst after 1987, and were plateaued from 1997 to 2007.
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, the United Kingdom's CO2 discharge started at 11
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and decreased constantly before ending at around 9
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in 2007.
Likewise
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, Sweden was about 9
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in the beginning and reached a peak of more than 10
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in 1967 before decreasing significantly to approximately 6
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in 2007.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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