The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its developments. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
provided information in two maps is the obvious shifts which are planned in the Islip metropolis centre.
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, the transportation infrastructure will be redeveloped in order to make way for modernizing commercial zones. Linking Words
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the school and the park remained at the same time, the park is predicted to be cut down inside so as to expand the road.Linking Words
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