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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after 5 years.

The provided pie chart depicts the types of activities of Anthropology graduates from a college after finishing their undergraduate degree and the given table provides information about the incomes of
anthropologists
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 in
work
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 after a duration of 5
years
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.
Overall
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, the majority of
anthropologists
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 have full-time
work
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 and those who
work
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 for the government sector have more wages after 5
years
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 in comparison with other types of
work
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. It is clear from the pie chart that about half of
anthropologists
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 have full-time
work
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 and 15 per
cent
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 of them function part-time. It is interesting to note that the portion of
anthropologists
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 who are unemployed is almost the same as the portion of
anthropologists
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 who have part-time jobs by 12 per
cent
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. the proportion of
anthropologists
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 who study for a postgraduate degree and have an unknown destination is equal to 8 per
cent
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 and a tiny fraction of them
work
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 part-time and study postgraduate simultaneously. Half of the
anthropologists
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 who
work
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 in the government sector
gain
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 plus 100K
dollars
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 after 5
years
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 and a third of them
gain
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 between 75K to 100K
dollars
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 after 5
years
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, the portions of
anthropologists
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 who obtain between 50K to 75K and 25K to 50K
dollars
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 are 15 per
cent
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 and 5 per
cent
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 respectively. The highest proportion of
anthropologists
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 who
work
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 in freelance consultants and private companies that
gain
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 over 100K after 5
years
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 is less than those who
work
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 in the government sector by 40 per
cent
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 and 30 per
cent
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,respectively.
Also
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, the portion of
anthropologists
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 who
work
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 as freelance consultants and
gain
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 75K to 100K
dollars
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 is the same.
In addition
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, the majority of
anthropologists
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 who function in private companies obtain 50K to 75K
dollars
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 exactly 35 per
cent
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words anthropologists, work, years, cent, gain, k, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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