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You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no-one has replied to your complaint. Write a letter to the taxi company. In your letter say why you are writing and how you feel explain what happened tell them what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Kiranpreet Kaur and writing to you to express my disappointment with one of my recent trips to Surrey central station from
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 road on 12th of May which I had with your taxi company. I am your regular customer and choose you for your exceptional service
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 to travel locally.
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 my
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 trip, I felt disgusted by the treatment I got from your driver with taxi number X985 which was a
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 and failed all of my expectations I had from your company. When I started on the journey, I told the driver to turn off the radio because he was playing music too loud but he didn't do so.
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, he told me he couldn't focus on driving without music. I was reading a book and it really wasted a lot of my time which I planned for my reading. Moving
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significant distress and wasted my time. I had never expected
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. But, I hope after you receive my letter you will take
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 him. Please ask him to write an apology note and will never cause any inconvenience to any of
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. I hope you will pay attention to my suggestions and take
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 situation. Yours faithfully, Kiranpreet Kaur
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clarity
Be concise and direct in your complaint for clearer communication.
task response
Consider offering more specific solutions or compensation you'd like from the company, beyond the driver's apology, for a stronger task response.
writing style
Use a variety of sentence structures to express your points for enhanced readability and engagement.
structure
You effectively structured your letter with an introduction, detailed explanation, and a clear request at the end, which contributes to a good logical flow.
tone
Your polite and formal tone throughout the letter is suitable for the context and demonstrates good task achievement.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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