The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its developments. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its developments.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps
depicts
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the town
centre
of
lslip
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slip
Islip
at present and the construction for improvement which
are
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is
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going to be done in future.
Overall
, the town
centre
will be more urbanized after the planned development. Travelling in the
area
will become more convenient owing to a new-built dual carriageway running around the
area
. Meanwhile, more
infrastrutures
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infrastructure
infrastructures
and residential buildings will be put up. Currently, there is only one main road running across the region from west to east with two divergent paths leading to the access of a school and a park respectively. After the construction, the main road will transformed
to
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a double-lane
motoway
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motorway
which will enable vehicles to travel
all
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in all
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directions around the
centre
. It will be still accessible
the
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school and the park, and
to
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a new housing
area
in addition
.
However
, the part of the road right across the
centre
now will be used for
pedestrains
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pedestrians
only. On the northern side of the footway, a bus station, a carpark and new housing will be built on the two sides of the remaining shopping
centre
. Shops on the other side of the footway will
be remained
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,
while
the residential
area
to the south of the shops will be expanded by reducing the size of the park.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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