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The bar chart below shows the enrolment of students in music at an Australian university from 2000 to 2006 and the pie chart shows their career choices after graduating. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the enrolment of students in music at an Australian university from 2000 to 2006 and the pie chart shows their career choices after graduating. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
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 presents data on the
rate
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 of
students
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 who enrolled on
music
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at an Australian university between 2000 and 2006 ,
while
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 the pie
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 illustrates which career was chosen by
students
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 after graduating
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,
according to
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chart
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, the majority of the people who enrolled
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music
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 are men ;
however
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, the opposite is true for women. Usually , which profession is selected after graduation by
students
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 . The
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 shows the
rate
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 of
students
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 who enrolled on
music
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 was exactly 20% of the total in 2000 , being the same as the girls’ proportion .
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 , it rose to about 25 per cent in 2001 and the number of
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 who enrolled
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music
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 classes increased each year until 2006 .
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, the biggest
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 of the
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 occurred in 2006 , with 60 per cent The pie
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 is divided into 3 parts and the different professions are the biggest part of the
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 . It is followed by similar professions and a quarter of the total
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 came from the same profession ;
nevertheless
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, similar professions made up a fifth of the total and
this
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 is the smallest fraction of the
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, rate, students, music with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 8 times.
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