The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in england, scotland, wales and northern ireland between 1980 and 2020

The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in england, scotland, wales and northern ireland between 1980 and 2020
The line graph illustrates the average
cheese
consumption
per person in four different countries (
England
, Scotland, Wales, and Northern Ireland) over 40 years from 1980 to 2020. Units are measured in
kilograms
.
Overall
, it is obvious that the
consumption
of
cheese
per person in
England
and Scotland rose during the period given
while
for Wales and Northern Ireland, it dropped.
In addition
,
England
was the leader in
cheese
consumption
throughout.
According to
the line graph, the average of
cheese
consumed in
England
went down gradually from above 100
kilograms
to just around 80
kilograms
in 2020.
Likewise
, the figure for
cheese
consumed in Scotland started at above 75
kilograms
in the first year, and
then
after reaching a peak of a little more than 100
kilograms
in 1990, it dropped down to around 50
kilograms
at the end
of the given period.
On the other hand
, the amount of
cheese
consumed in Northern Ireland increased dramatically from more or less 10
kilograms
in 1980 to just over 50
kilograms
in the
last
year.
Similarly
,
cheese
consumption
in Wales climbed slightly from under 50
kilograms
in 1980 to more than 75
kilograms
in 2020.
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