The maps below show an Industrial area in the town of Norton, and planned future development of the site.
The provided maps depict a major changeover plan for the current Norbiton industrial area. It is obvious that there is an intention to build a well-facilitated residency which will replace the existing factory site.
Currently, the industrial area is strictly utilized for production where plants are widely spread across the premises.
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, the future blueprint clearly illustrates how these plants will be demolished and substituted with numerous housings with supporting infrastructures.
Going into details, it is apparent that the location will provide a handful of services to its residents. Linking Words
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, there will be a school which is located on the east and conveniently placed next to a playground that beautifully resides on the river bank. Linking Words
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, a medical centre is targeted to be developed near the big roundabout with a number of shops that will be available just by crossing the street. Linking Words
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, the placement of housing is very strategic and can be divided into three regions. The first one will be on the north side right after the bridge. The next region will have a nice view of the river. Linking Words
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complex will have fast access to education, health and recreational places.Linking Words
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