he graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

he graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the numbers of visitors staying on
ships
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and going on the
island
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in a Caribbean
island
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between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
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, during the given period, there was an upward trend in the
number
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of visitors visiting
this
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island
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. Before the middle of 2015, the
number
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of tourists staying on the
island
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was consistently higher than the figure for those on cruise
ships
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. In 2010, there were 1
million
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people
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visiting
this
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Caribbean
island
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, with 0.75
million
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on
ships
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and 0.25
million
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on land. In the next few years, both figures steadily increased, but the gap between the two numbers gradually narrowed to about 0.5
million
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. In 2015, the
number
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of total visitors came to approximately 2.75
million
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.
This
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year, the
number
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of
people
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who chose not to go on the
island
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exceeded its on-
island
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counterpart. In the next year, there was not a big change in terms of the total visitor's
number
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, but the
number
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of
people
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staying on
ships
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was slightly higher than
people
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staying on the
island
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. In 2017, both figures saw a sharp rise to 2
million
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(stayed on
ships
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) and 1.5
million
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(stayed on the
island
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).
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ships, island, number, million, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • gradual increase
  • sharp decline
  • steady growth
  • plateau
  • seasonal variation
  • external influences
  • tourist influx
  • sustainable tourism
  • economic impact
  • hospitality industry
  • travel restrictions
  • visitor statistics
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