the chart below shows that Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the Anthropologist in work after five years
The pie chart illustrates what anthropology
graduates
in one university did after finishing their bachelor
degree, categorized by six distinct Change noun form
bachelor's
destination
and measured in percentage. Meanwhile, the table gives information about the four Change to a plural noun
destinations
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ranges
range
of money they would receive after working more than 5 years based on three different Fix the agreement mistake
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type
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types
Overall
, the majority of graduates
would end up as a full-time worker. Furthermore
, half of graduates
, who had worked in the Add an article
the graduates
goverment
sector for more than five Correct your spelling
government
year
, would receive Change to a plural noun
years
income
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an income
more
than $100.000, the highest earnings among the categories.
More than 50% of Change preposition
of more
graduates
chosed
to be a full-time employer. Part-time Correct your spelling
choose
chosen
chose
worker
ranked the second place Fix the agreement mistake
workers
of
15%, followed by unemployed in third place, with 12%. The rest, namely full-time postgrad Change preposition
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student
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students
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worker
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workers
student
were below 10%, which were 8%, 8%, and 5%, respectively.
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students
privat
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private
employee
earned more money in the first category ($25.000-49.999) than the other groups. Fix the agreement mistake
employees
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, Correct your spelling
Similarly
this
pattern also
happened in second
group ($50.000-74.999) with 35% for Add an article
the second
privat
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private
employee
and 15% for Fix the agreement mistake
employees
other group
.
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another group
other groups
However
, the rest of the range displayed different situations, since freelance consultant
and government Fix the agreement mistake
consultants
employee
surpassed the number of Fix the agreement mistake
employees
the
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apply
privat
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private
employee
. The former ranked the first Fix the agreement mistake
employees
positition
in Correct your spelling
position
third
category ($75.000-99.999) and the latter Add an article
the third
were
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first place in Correct article usage
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fourth
category ($100.000-above) at 50%.Correct article usage
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