The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the statistics regarding regional catches and imported fresh
fish
into Perth, Australia over a 10-year period, starting in 2004. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that there was a significant consumption of fresh Linking Words
fish
in Perth during 2008-2010. The highest Use synonyms
number
of local catches Use synonyms
showed
in 2008, Verb problem
was
whereas
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import
Correct article usage
the import
fresh
Change preposition
of fresh
fish
peaked in 2010.
Use synonyms
Initially
, in 2004, local catches commenced with the lowest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
fish
, with just over 2,500 metric Use synonyms
tons
. The Use synonyms
number
increased gradually for the next four years, Use synonyms
then
rocketed to its peak at well over 8,000 metric Linking Words
tons
in 2008. After that, it experienced a moderate decline and recovered in 2014, finishing at approximately 5,000 metric Use synonyms
tons
.
Regarding the imports, Use synonyms
it
predominantly began at Correct pronoun usage
they
the
lower Correct article usage
a
number
compared to regional catches, at about 450 metric Use synonyms
tons
. Fresh Use synonyms
fish
were increasingly imported into Perth until reaching its peak at 1,200 metric Use synonyms
tons
in 2012. Use synonyms
However
, it dropped to just under 800 metric Linking Words
tons
Use synonyms
at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, number, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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