The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking the visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period
The table illustrates how many
visitors
visited the Ashdown Museum
the year
before and the following year
it was refurbished. Also
, the pie charts show the result of research asking visitors
how they felt about their visit during the same two periods.
Overall
, the visitors
’ number
which they visited the Ashdown Museum
during the year
after refurbishment
was significantly higher than the visitors
figure which that visitors
who visited that museum
during the year
before refurbishment
Firstly
, the researches illustrate that the number
of very dissatisfied Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
visitor
numbers gradually minimized Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
year
after refurbishment
. Also
, those who answered dissatisfied with the survey of satisfaction remarkably decreased the year
after refurbishment
too.
After the development of the museum
, the very satisfied visitor number
was greatly maximized. And the satisfied visitor number
increased similarly
to very satisfied visitors
.However
, the quality of visitors
who did not get responses to the survey of satisfaction did not change in the same two periods.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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