The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions between 1967 and 2007
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions between 1967 and 2007
The line graph illustrates the emissions of
carbon
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dioxide in metric
tons
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by each person in 4 different Countries over
the
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40 years. From the line
graph
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graph,
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it is clear that
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carbon
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dioxide emissions declined in
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Kingdom and Sweden between 1967 and 2007.
On the other hand
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in Italy and
Portugal
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Portugal,
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it gradually climbed over the period shown. When looking in
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it can be described that the
carbon
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emission
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in
United
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the United
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Stated
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gradually went down from 11 metric
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to 9
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between 1967 and 2007. The
emission
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in Sweden had a rapid growth
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over 10 metric
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over a period of 10 years,
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it had a significant decline to 5 metric
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till 2007. It can be seen that Portugal had the lowest
carbon
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emission
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in 1967 under 2 metric
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which considerably rose and reached over 5 metric
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over the end of the shown period. The same
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was
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seen by Italy which inclined nearly from 4 metric
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to just under 8 between 1967 and 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, tons, emission with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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