The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.
The chart illustrates the total amount of
distance
travelled by passengers
on five means of transportation in the UK from 1990 to 2000.
Overall
, the total distance
travelled by five types of transport has increased in number, except for motorbikes and bicycles went down. The figures for the total distance
travelled by air increased the most, while
by bicycle went down.
In 1990, the total distance
passengers
travelled by bus was the highest, about 42 billion
kilometres
, followed by the second rail, approximately 32 million kilometres
. In contrast
, the distance
travelled by air was the lowest, about 3 billion
kilometres
. After 10 years passengers
travelling by air increased the most, at 6 billion
kilometres
but still lower than bus and rail which had increased by 3 and 4 billion
kilometres
.
On the other hand
, the distance
travelled by motorbike and bicycle stood at 5 and 7 billion
kilometres
. After 10 years both of them declined significantly, from 7 to 4 billion
and 5 to 3 for motorbikes and bicycles. Finally
, the total kilometres
travelled by passengers
increased from 100 in 1990 to 110 billion
kilometres
in 2000.Submitted by [email protected] on
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