The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.

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The chart illustrates the total amount of

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travelled by

passengers

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on five means of transportation in the UK from 1990 to 2000.

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, the total

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travelled by five types of transport has increased in number, except for motorbikes and bicycles went down. The figures for the total

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travelled by air increased the most,

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by bicycle went down. In 1990, the total

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passengers

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travelled by bus was the highest, about 42

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kilometres

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, followed by the second rail, approximately 32 million

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In contrast

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, the

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travelled by air was the lowest, about 3

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kilometres

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. After 10 years

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travelling by air increased the most, at 6

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but still lower than bus and rail which had increased by 3 and 4

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On the other hand

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, the

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travelled by motorbike and bicycle stood at 5 and 7

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. After 10 years both of them declined significantly, from 7 to 4

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and 5 to 3 for motorbikes and bicycles.

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, the total

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travelled by

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increased from 100 in 1990 to 110

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kilometres

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in 2000.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.

In some countries, rich countries are becoming rich and poor are becoming poorer. What are the causes of this problem? How can this problem be tackle? educat, governm, spent earn

Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live luxurious lives, in contrast, academicians and scientists earn far less. Do you agree that academicians and scientist ought to be paid more?

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Some think schools should rewards students who have the best academic results, while others think it’s more important to reward students who achieve other types of success (such as sports, music, and good behavior). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.