thw graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph illustrates data about the number of people living in 4 Asian countries over
51-year
period from 1970 to 2020, with assumptions by 2040. The unit of measurement is percentage. Add an article
a 51-year
the 51-year
Overall
, it is apparently seen that the population saw a Linking Words
rose
in all countries, namely Replace the word
rise
Philippines
, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia.
It is crystal clear that the number of people increased sharply from 1990 in Malaysia (from 45%) Correct article usage
the Philippines
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was
decreased Verb problem
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for
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in
Philippines
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the Philippines
However
, there was a rise in 2010 and predicted that would be kept by 2040. Meanwhile, the figures Linking Words
of
Thailand and Indonesia had a steady Change preposition
for
rose
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,
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assumed
to be at 45% and 60% Add a missing verb
are assumed
accordingly
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