The chart below shows the results of a survey about patients who stayed in different wards of a hospital. The chart also shows the percentage of patients who replied ‘very good’ about the various aspects of their hospital experience.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about patients who stayed in different wards of a hospital. The chart also shows the percentage of patients who replied ‘very good’ about the various aspects of their hospital experience.
The bar chart illustrates the differences in the
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on
three
wards
from patients staying there. It is obvious that the percentage of patients in Holly Ward who replied 'very good' about their hospital experience, including hospital staff, waiting
time
,
quality
of treatment and
quality
of aftercare, was the largest, was the largest in the
three
wards
. Apart from waiting
time
, all the satisfying proportions were over 80%. In terms of Maple and Oak
wards
, the figure of hospital staff,
quality
of treatment and
quality
of aftercare in Maple was more than that in Oak ward and the gap in the
last
one was the largest, approximately one in five.
Similarly
, the happiness percentages in
quality
of treatment in both
wards
were the highest, being up to 70% and 80% respectively.
While
the percentages in waiting
time
were the lowest in both
wards
compared with the other
three
conditions, they are matched with each other.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the figures for waiting
time
in the
three
wards
were the lowest.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, wards, time, quality with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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